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Re: Haiku written by reprobates

Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2017 9:58 am
by cantfishforshit.
He is from N.C.
Suck a bag of dicks he can
Autumn air colored leaves grouse

Re: Haiku written by reprobates

Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2017 10:05 pm
by yard4sale
cantfishforshit. wrote:
Thu Oct 19, 2017 9:58 am
He is from N.C.
Suck a bag of dicks he can
Autumn air colored leaves grouse
Learn to count catshit
Raffa and catshit love dix
Art is subjective

Re: Haiku written by reprobates

Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2017 11:29 pm
by pbrstreetgang
the 17 syllable format is flexible - with "good" Haiku (subjective) going beyond that construct. Here, however, I am not sure we can apply that considering the set up and delivery.
D+, only because it started with the basics, then rapidly disintegrated like trump reading from a teleprompter.

Pray for winter clouds
on a sleepy river pool
shadows in shadows


y4s - I am glad you omitted the comma. The wordplay reminds me of Tony Harrison, albeit from a great distance

Re: Haiku written by reprobates

Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2017 12:09 am
by yard4sale
Commas are teh ghey
Exclamation marks are worse
Tard has periods

Re: Haiku written by reprobates

Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2017 8:12 am
by austrotard
no, they're full stops.
I once smoked a lot of pots.
this is fucking gay.

Re: Haiku written by reprobates

Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2017 7:18 pm
by cantfishforshit.
yard4sale wrote:
Thu Oct 19, 2017 10:05 pm
cantfishforshit. wrote:
Thu Oct 19, 2017 9:58 am
He is from N.C.
Suck a bag of dicks he can
Autumn air colored leaves grouse
Learn to count catshit
Raffa and catshit love dix
Art is subjective
I nevur cood cownt

Re: Haiku written by reprobates

Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2017 8:58 pm
by TX.
Really Shawn?
We don't even know what you're saying in person

Re: Haiku written by reprobates

Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2017 5:45 am
by austrotard
you are sleeping
you do not want to believe
you are sleeping

Re: Haiku written by reprobates

Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2017 5:46 am
by fishskibum
Redchaser wrote:
Thu Apr 14, 2016 9:13 pm
Username: Jamespio

Joined:11 Oct 2006 06:01 am
Last active:08 Mar 2016 08:13 pm
Total posts:124 | Search user’s posts
(0.02% of all posts / 0.04 posts per day) Most active forum:General Discussion
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(18 Posts / 14.52% of user’s posts)

I have no idea if it's his birthday, but the dipshit is running for congress. http://www.votepiotrowski.com

And he snuck in here on March 8th and edited out most of his old post. I guess he's scared an opponent might Google him and find post of him calling people pussies and being a general douche, a good bit of which is still captured in quotes.
So this dipshit did the same thing only deleted way more of others good stuff over at the blue screened ski e-land trying to pretend he wasn't a turdly waste of bandwith
then comes back after getting his ass kicked by an even sadder elephant polimouthbreather named raul
so i calls him on it

you deleted a bunch of good posts
in order to not appear as the asshole you are
only to fail
own it or scram

i know my broku is strong and scored when i get my words back in poli butthurt blabber 4 fold
I decided that trying to do some good for the people of my state was more important than a ridiculous off-topic internet forum. Especially after the denizens of that forum showed up and started poking around my campaign's social media presence. So, yeah, I'll own the fact that I had to try to do something to save the places you fish, hunt and ski (you're welcome). And that to do that, as well as to try to improve medical care for our veterans, and begin addressing the failures of our economy that are falling disproportionately on young people, rural communities and minorities, I had to try to clean up my image because the only hope for the things you claim to believe in was to run a nearly perfect campaign, without the help of the self-righteous, stoner, assholes who are too self-absorbed to bother with doing hard jobs like trying to change their state or country. I don't apologize for any of it, because it was the right thing to do, and I'd do it again because almost anything is more important than the fucking Padded Room.

Re: Haiku written by reprobates

Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2017 8:55 pm
by Redchaser
fishskibum wrote:
Sat Nov 11, 2017 5:46 am
Redchaser wrote:
Thu Apr 14, 2016 9:13 pm
Username: Jamespio

Joined:11 Oct 2006 06:01 am
Last active:08 Mar 2016 08:13 pm
Total posts:124 | Search user’s posts
(0.02% of all posts / 0.04 posts per day) Most active forum:General Discussion
(124 Posts / 100.00% of user’s posts)Most active topic:FFM selling out to Beaver and Co....
(18 Posts / 14.52% of user’s posts)

I have no idea if it's his birthday, but the dipshit is running for congress. http://www.votepiotrowski.com

And he snuck in here on March 8th and edited out most of his old post. I guess he's scared an opponent might Google him and find post of him calling people pussies and being a general douche, a good bit of which is still captured in quotes.
So this dipshit did the same thing only deleted way more of others good stuff over at the blue screened ski e-land trying to pretend he wasn't a turdly waste of bandwith
then comes back after getting his ass kicked by an even sadder elephant polimouthbreather named raul
so i calls him on it

you deleted a bunch of good posts
in order to not appear as the asshole you are
only to fail
own it or scram

i know my broku is strong and scored when i get my words back in poli butthurt blabber 4 fold
I decided that trying to do some good for the people of my state was more important than a ridiculous off-topic internet forum. Especially after the denizens of that forum showed up and started poking around my campaign's social media presence. So, yeah, I'll own the fact that I had to try to do something to save the places you fish, hunt and ski (you're welcome). And that to do that, as well as to try to improve medical care for our veterans, and begin addressing the failures of our economy that are falling disproportionately on young people, rural communities and minorities, I had to try to clean up my image because the only hope for the things you claim to believe in was to run a nearly perfect campaign, without the help of the self-righteous, stoner, assholes who are too self-absorbed to bother with doing hard jobs like trying to change their state or country. I don't apologize for any of it, because it was the right thing to do, and I'd do it again because almost anything is more important than the fucking Padded Room.
Pio has a knack for being a pompous self righteous douche. There was a time when he showed me a kindness and I was much appreciative, however when he showed up on the Drake he came in calling everyone pussies and generally acting like a dick so I called him out on it, his reply was to chastise me for it, reminding me that he had once done a good deed for me, I thanked him again for the good deed but told him it doesn't give him a pass to act like a dick...in so many words..

Re: Haiku written by reprobates

Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2017 10:33 pm
by K_P
Piotrowski has only four syllables. Therefore, as the founder of this thread and a 5/7/5 purist, I forbid his name to sully this thread again.

Had lunch with the guy once. He was congenial, in person. Online, he's a different critter.

Consistently. Different.

Re: Haiku written by reprobates

Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2017 11:14 pm
by CarelessEthiopian
K_P wrote:
Sat Nov 11, 2017 10:33 pm
Piotrowski has only four syllables. Therefore, as the founder of this thread and a 5/7/5 purist, I forbid his name to sully this thread again.
Just put the James in front of it. Or cunt.

On the blue screen forum, he recently posted a picture of a fish in the grass and defended it by saying it's better than a stiffarm photo.